Massa massa si aayi maut
ik hor hii adchan pe gayi
oh kal milan da vaada kar gayi
saanu ummer vdhaani pe gayi
Baah fadke rok lende,je chalda koi zor hunda
assi tere piche kyoN rulde,,je tere jeha koi hor hunda
asi ucchya de naal laai yaari , sada bhunje (Thalle) lagda pair nai,
asi ese chaa vich udd de firde haa, per sajjna de kol sade lai time nai,
shadd ve dila koi gall nai, sajjna de lai tu ki gall jhall sakda enna dukh v nai!!!!!!!!!!!
Ji karda ae ,ajj baat koi paun nu
te apne dil dian sunon nu,,
Ji karda ae , lambi udari ik laun nu
Neele ambra’n te aalna banon nu
ke bahut chir kajj leya pairan nu …
Ji karda ae,chana’n nal akhan chundeaun nu,
te var var palkan jhapkaun nu,
ke bahut chir akhan moondi seh lea hanere nu …..
Ji karda ae, baagi ho jaan nu ,
kise navi manjil vall chale paun nu
ke bahut chir kaid rakh leya es rooh nu …
Ji karda ae , geet koi gun-gunon nu
koi mithi dhun sunon nu
ke bahut chir alap leya birho de raag nu
Ji karda ae, vapas part jan nu ,
mud vatna vall fera paun nu
ke bahut chir gah leya pardes nu
Ji tan karda Ae tenu bhull jan nu
kadi na teri rah vich aaon nu
eh dil chandra kio keh reha
Kera’n TENU gal nal laun nu??
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Well written..
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http://www.yoindia.com ..
wah hujur wah
kya shayeri hai
dil bhar aaya
koi chot dil pe lagi hai ya
chot khai bina hi dard ka maja le rahe hain
lovely
“uppron di lang gayen mohabatan de kafflein, thaleon di nadiyan de neerna haniya de rahen na paniya de rahen, pullan jehi sadi takdeer”
awesome shayari
Very Nice blog i appricate your work..Your a shayari King
You are good made keep it up, here is something that I wrote for my love….
Teri tareef ch kujh keha ta chanani sharamsaar howegi,
Wekh tere naina di joti jindagi chamakdaar howegi,
Har din saaranga jism nu te har raat bekaraar howegi,
Raha bhaawe kise vi barooh andar mar-marke jindagi gunjaar howegi,
Par fer vi mai intzaar karanga us rutt da jadd mere vi baaghi bahar howegi…….
You are good mate, but there is something that is missing in your poetry, try to write with real passion, god knows that you can be very good some day….
Manish Kumar
nice work guys!!…..
i ve some written by me too…….
teri akhan wich menu mera rab dikhda,
tu menu sohneya saari duniya to wakh dikhda,
pyar tere naal nahi, teri rooh naal si paya,
meri baki bachi zindgi ik tu hi hai sarmaya,
rab kolo dil io hun mangda dua,
mera har ik saah bas hove tere naa!!
yaadan terian ch jind sadi mar muk challi,
tu sanu chad ke tur gayi bagane mulk kalli kalli,
pyade sade da tu mul ik kaudi wi na paya,
door jake tenu sada cheta wi na aaya,
tenu wekhan nu dil sada taras aaya,
asi mar wi jayie ta wi tenu ambran to milan aavange,
par maran to pehla sohniye tenu apna jaroor banavange!!
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